Great descriptive writing Ariana. I like that you used the sentence starter. Next time describe the words like wheel with detail words to make it more exciting. Colour, size, shape, feel :) Good work Ariana
Great descriptive writing Ariana. I like that you used the sentence starter. Next time describe the words like wheel with detail words to make it more exciting. Colour, size, shape, feel :) Good work Ariana
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